Should nuclear power be promoted? 原子力の利用は促進すべきか否か？　というお題で英検１級のライティングしてみた📕

今日は

Should nuclear power be promoted?
〜原子力の利用は促進すべきか否か？〜

というお題で英検１級のライティングを練習がてら書いてみました！

10月に英検１級を受ける方がいらっしゃれば一緒に頑張りましょう！！

かんそうや私ならこう書くといった意見などあればいただけると嬉しいです！

それではさっそく始めましょう。

まず最初の難問は、このお題についての立場を明らかにして、そこに付随する　Pros & Cons を考えることですよね。

ちなみに私は

⭐️原子力の促進に反対

という立場で書きました。

理由は

①原発事故の危険性

②人体への影響

③核兵器になり得ること
の３本の矢で勝負します。

Intro

The nuclear power is used various ways.

Some say that the maintenance of the nuclear power is essential to make our lives better such as the generation of the electricity.

However I personally think the nuclear power should not be promoted for following 3 reasons.

Body 1

Firstly, the nuclear power could negatively affect the environment when the natural disaster happens.

In 2013, the biggest earthquake attacked Fukushima. Because of that,, the facilities which generated the electricity from nuclear was exploded, then leaked poisoned substance from there.

Many indigenous species was going to extinct.

Body2

Secondly, it could also damaged the human body.

One study shows that people living near nuclear facilities would from leukemia at the very high rate.

The mechanism of nuclear is not proven perfectly.

However, it may be deeply connected with the cause of some disease.

Body 3

Lastly, it possibly become the nuclear weapons easily.

The movements to ban the use of nuclear weapons have been promoted.

Promoting the nuclear power is completely against the eradication of them.

Conclusion

Because of all the reasons above, to endanger the environment, damaging the human body and to eradicate the nuclear weapons, the nuclear power should be restricted.

いかがでしょうか？　

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